As I approached, he frowned, recognising the crumpled note I held in my hand.
How could I tell him, she wasn’t coming?
– ⋅ o ♥ o ⋅ –
Clare's Cosmos
A Galaxy of Thoughts and Creativity
As I approached, he frowned, recognising the crumpled note I held in my hand.
How could I tell him, she wasn’t coming?
– ⋅ o ♥ o ⋅ –
I love this! Beautiful, poignant, and – of course – concise.
I’m going to struggle with this particular Writing101 challenge for sure…’concise’ writing is not my bag 😉
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Thank you Twin Butterfly,
Just remember, sometimes less is more.
Clare
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Wow.. good one
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Thank you Tinu
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By all means, Clare, please bottle your talent and share it with me. 🙂
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Hi Clare! Love this! Would you mind if I rubbed elbows with you so some of your writing talent would rub off on me??? 😀
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Hi Bethie,
You really are too kind, but perhaps I should see if I can bottle something for you. 😊
Clare
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