As I approached, he frowned, recognising the crumpled note I held in my hand.
How could I tell him, she wasn’t coming?
– ⋅ o ♥ o ⋅ –
CLARE'S COSMOS
A Galaxy of Thoughts and Creativity
As I approached, he frowned, recognising the crumpled note I held in my hand.
How could I tell him, she wasn’t coming?
– ⋅ o ♥ o ⋅ –
CLARE'S COSMOS 
I love this! Beautiful, poignant, and – of course – concise.
I’m going to struggle with this particular Writing101 challenge for sure…’concise’ writing is not my bag 😉
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Thank you Twin Butterfly,
Just remember, sometimes less is more.
Clare
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Wow.. good one
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Thank you Tinu
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By all means, Clare, please bottle your talent and share it with me. 🙂
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Hi Clare! Love this! Would you mind if I rubbed elbows with you so some of your writing talent would rub off on me??? 😀
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Hi Bethie,
You really are too kind, but perhaps I should see if I can bottle something for you. 😊
Clare
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awesome write up..how u did it.!
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Thank you HumaAq
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It’s so nice. I think my heart just broke into two. 😦
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Thank you,
I think I will have to try writing more stories in this concise way.
Clare
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Wow. THAT was classy. How’d you learn to do that? Totally spot on in so few words. Very floored.
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🙂 🙂 I guess it comes from years of writing concise technical instructions. (If that’s not an oxymoron.)
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Well I’d like to SEE some of those instructions! LOL
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Excellent work!
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Thank you Christoph
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Very nice!
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Thank you Jujubean
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